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LONDON_9_FarnooshMoayeri-HTML/CSS-WEEK-3 - #452

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Volunteers: Are you marking this coursework? You can find a guide on how to mark this coursework in HOW_TO_MARK.md in the root of this repository

Your Details

  • Your Name:Farnoosh Moayeri
  • Your City:London
  • Your Slack Name: Farnoosh Moayeri

Homework Details

  • Module:HTML/CSS
  • Week:3

Notes

  • What did you find easy?

  • What did you find hard?Alignment/grid

  • What do you still not understand?Alignment/ grid

  • Any other notes?


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qingwei91 self-requested a review November 16, 2022 20:23
Comment thread style.css
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/* Add your styling here */
body {

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Hi Farnoosh, good try on this PR, but it seems like your page is not responsive, can you work on that?

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I have worded on that, I look forward to hear your suggestions:)

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<body>
<!-- Add your markup here -->
</body>
<header class="header" style="height: 32vh">

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It is better to use css to configure style, can you try move this into ccs?

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<li class="nav_item"><a class="nav_link" href="#"> Ordering</a></li>
<li class="nav_item"><a class="nav_link" href="#">Lessons</a></li>
<li class="nav_item"><a class="nav_link" href="#">About</a></li>
</ul>

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At the moment, these links does not seems to do anything, is it still work in progress?

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I haven't linked them yet. Actually I forgot it :(

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/* hero */
.hero {

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Why is this called hero?

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I used it because I thought it was the important section. Was it wrong?

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This term is new to me in this context, thus my question.

I googled and found the answer: https://www.awebco.com/blog/hero-section/

all good

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</p>
</div>
<div class="welcome_image">
<img src="img/Cake-.jpeg" alt="cake" width="300" height="300" />

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Ditto, it is better to use css to configure style, and you probably want to avoid hard coding width and height for it to be responsive

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Hard coding normally means writing special numbers into your code that is hard/impossible to change without changing code

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Thank you for the information.

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width="200"
height="100"
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Ditto for all hard coded width/height

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I changed them:)

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Hi @Farnooshmo , is this ready for review? if so, can you deploy to netlify so that I can have a look?

If not ready yet that's ok, just let me know when it is

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Farnooshmo commented Nov 21, 2022

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Hi @qingwei91, Tomorrow I will deploy it and let you know 🙏

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Hi @qingwei91 , here is the link to the cake project:
https://cyf-farnooshmoayeri-cakes.netlify.app/

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Great improvement 👍
I think the page looks good in mobile, but it can probably be improved on the desktop view, it does not seems to fill the page.

There's a lot of space on the right, and its not aligned properly, can you think of a way to solve this?

Screenshot 2022-11-23 at 20 51 29

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